Comments on: How to clearly show your story to your reader http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397 Wed, 08 Sep 2010 12:08:46 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: An example to illustrate… at http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397&cpage=1#comment-1502 An example to illustrate… at Thu, 18 Mar 2010 16:51:33 +0000 http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397#comment-1502 [...] kennel but it seemed like a distraction before BUT by HEARING the breathing it engages more of our senses and we start to experience the scene a bit more. Now we are in a car, there is a dog sleeping [...] [...] kennel but it seemed like a distraction before BUT by HEARING the breathing it engages more of our senses and we start to experience the scene a bit more. Now we are in a car, there is a dog sleeping [...]

]]> By: An example to illustrate… at http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397&cpage=1#comment-1503 An example to illustrate… at Thu, 18 Mar 2010 16:51:32 +0000 http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397#comment-1503 [...] kennel but it seemed like a distraction before BUT by HEARING the breathing it engages more of our senses and we start to experience the scene a bit more. Now we are in a car, there is a dog sleeping [...] [...] kennel but it seemed like a distraction before BUT by HEARING the breathing it engages more of our senses and we start to experience the scene a bit more. Now we are in a car, there is a dog sleeping [...]

]]> By: Loretta Perry http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397&cpage=1#comment-372 Loretta Perry Fri, 23 Oct 2009 02:55:46 +0000 http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397#comment-372 I loved this post. As a globally certified career coach and resume writer I am very big on how statements are worded to get the best impact and you had some great examples. I often read advice in blogs but the writer never gives an example and sometimes it is really required to help the reader get the picture...just like when you write the story. Again, loved the article, thanks for sharing. I loved this post. As a globally certified career coach and resume writer I am very big on how statements are worded to get the best impact and you had some great examples. I often read advice in blogs but the writer never gives an example and sometimes it is really required to help the reader get the picture…just like when you write the story. Again, loved the article, thanks for sharing.

]]> By: Susan J. Reinhardt http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397&cpage=1#comment-346 Susan J. Reinhardt Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:55:26 +0000 http://writingcareercoach.com/?p=397#comment-346 Hi Tiffany - Thanks for the suggestions. I particularly like the one about incorporating the senses on every page. I'm sure I haven't done that in my manuscript. Hmm, I'll have to see how the book I'm currently reading accomplishes this. Blessings, Susan :) Hi Tiffany -

Thanks for the suggestions. I particularly like the one about incorporating the senses on every page. I’m sure I haven’t done that in my manuscript.

Hmm, I’ll have to see how the book I’m currently reading accomplishes this.

Blessings,
Susan :)

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